Today we have been thinking about if Tristan should look through the machine again or should he leave it alone so we have made a padlet about our ideas of what he should have done I have chosen to say yes because I to are interested in what could happen here is what I wrote on the padlet.

Kia ora Rachael,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used unforeseen and it makes the sentence more interesting.
Sorry for saying this but I think you need to read you answer out loud.
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