My ANZAC Reflection.

This week learning about ANZAC was great and I have learnt a lot that I will remember for years Because I took a BIG whiff of rose merry before I started.

What:This week learning about ANZAC was very reflective like remembering about their times and how they sacrificed their lives to fight for their country and to fight for what they believe in.I learnt that there was a man called Simpson who would ride on his donkey to carry injured soldiers.

So What: Simpson was eventually killed on his donkey and he was remembered for his brave duty saving the wounded soldiers that fought and that he also risked his own life to save others.Also learning about your history gives you the opportunity to tell generations about what happened in the past and in the before times.

Now What: I am going to ask more about what happened to my ancestors past and what they did that was legendary and what their remembered for.

My explanation

In Week 6 of Term 1 our class focussed on how to write great explanations. We wrote about how to survive your first night in Mine craft (the game a lot of us are obsessed with!).

Here is my writing, after I have self-assessed and peer-assessed my work.

https://docs.google.com/a/haypark.school.nz/document/d/11rsSIPtGUXR27M8HrlaU2FblGjpaLYicFS7uoQIk5WY/edit

here is my steps to surviving your first night in mine craft.

Signs of Success!	Self	Peer
Introduction - briefly tells the reader what the explanation is about	yes	Yes
Present tense	yes	Yes
Formal Language; Technical Language	yes	Yes
Time connectives	yes	Yes
Sequenced and paragraphed (paragraphs have 1 main idea!)	yes	Yes
Ambitious vocabulary (adjectives; verbs)	yes	Yes
Summary - may have an interesting fact or comment about playing the game	yes	Yes

Rachael's Goal setting

https://docs.google.com/a/haypark.school.nz/presentation/d/17sX429bjabexCi4qnbMBCAMg_gI8mmhy0ItsjXU7U8U/edit#slide=id.p



This is my goal setting conference link I hope you like it.

I'M A YEAR SIX IN 2015!!!

It's term 1

and so far I've had a great start to the year we've done maths, reading, writing, science

and art. It's been awesome I'm proud of my work so far. It's actually exciting for me to start a new year especially if it's in a brand new classroom known as the Technology room. The only word that describes this is AWESOME!!!

End of year reflection

https://docs.google.com/a/haypark.school.nz/presentation/d/1U1cXgQ6YNO7U5XIzS6mnE9scGM_obkapJcorFmevi3w/edit#slide=id.g54ae4c520_020

My map of coral reefs

Today I learnt facts and information about different reefs like the great barrier reef the great barrier reef is the largest reef.

My word cloud

This is my word cloud about thinking,participating and contributing,Using Language, Symbols and Texts,managing self and relating to others.